Assignment 1.2: The Memory Box - Individual Project
A.1.3 Partner:Luz Earley and her wiki link is HERE.
Feedback from Partner and other Audiences:
Rolando, ChopstiX Champion has the potential of an amusing story telling session! Using a topic for your story involving family gives connection to listeners, and a way for them to remember their own "restaurant experiences." Reading through the story left me waiting for the climax, and produced an effect when the final act occurred. It contains a solid introduction, and follows through with the layout you prepared in your story map. I am excited about viewing your video of this delightful story!
I received feedback from my daughter, son, and wife and they all enjoyed the story. They all told me the same thing, "That's not what happened." But I insisted that it was an interpretation of the events, embellished to make the story more appealing to an audience. They said that I told the story with enthusiasm and energy. They even said some parts were funny, but a bit corny.
By Luz reviewing my first video taping of The ChopstiX Champion and we discussed the eliminating one of the introduction artifact items to reduce the time of the overall story. By making this and some minor adjustments to the story, I believe I will be able to fall within the allotted time frame.
Assignment 1.2: The Memory Box - Individual Project
A.1.3 Partner: Luz Earley and her wiki link is HERE.
Feedback from Partner and other Audiences:
Rolando, ChopstiX Champion has the potential of an amusing story telling session! Using a topic for your story involving family gives connection to listeners, and a way for them to remember their own "restaurant experiences." Reading through the story left me waiting for the climax, and produced an effect when the final act occurred. It contains a solid introduction, and follows through with the layout you prepared in your story map. I am excited about viewing your video of this delightful story!
I received feedback from my daughter, son, and wife and they all enjoyed the story. They all told me the same thing, "That's not what happened." But I insisted that it was an interpretation of the events, embellished to make the story more appealing to an audience. They said that I told the story with enthusiasm and energy. They even said some parts were funny, but a bit corny.
By Luz reviewing my first video taping of The ChopstiX Champion and we discussed the eliminating one of the introduction artifact items to reduce the time of the overall story. By making this and some minor adjustments to the story, I believe I will be able to fall within the allotted time frame.
Link to Story Map:
The ChopstiX Champion
Link to Final Story:
YouTube video: ChopstiX Champion Take 1
Final YouTube video: ChopstiX Champion